Angel of Death

Hey! Now I can't imagine how you look because you told us. :x

Jared and Hannah were in front of their room, staring at Tomo confusedly when he barreled into them. Tomo knew they wouldn't take him seriously but he had to convince ...

Tomo slipped the key into the lock. He could feel it curve into every corner of the keyhole. A click sounded when the door opener was turned to the right. ...

I will read over the first two later but I thought these two parts were an improvement. I felt the emotions that Safira felt and the way you described her ...

Compliments to the Writer This was beautifully written and I hope you continue it. Words oh where are thy Words Your vocabulary is very beautiful and the figurative language you ...

Beginning The beginning should be labeled as a prologue because it has a prologue feel. We don't know the characters and it would only be right if that was made ...

OMG!! This was really beautiful :cry: I haven't read any of your poetry in a long time but my theory still remains true: You are a great poet, almost like ...

I'm in. I'll be Tomo :D

10/10 I think the different blues are amazing and the message is cool too.

Love It This was thrilling! I couldn't stop reading. Wow. One other thing that I liked about this which was kind of minor was the romantic-ness. I'm a sucker for ...

Hey BBB!!! How's life? My, we haven't talked in ages. Well anyways...Wow. I can't believe I haven't read this before, this was amazing. I was really hooked from beginning to ...

"Lets read until the storm ends,"-William "Come on, Will, afraid to get wet?"-Edward "Reading sounds nice,"-Elizabeth "When its storming outside, the best thing to do is go to sleep,"-Maxine Do ...

In a way this is almost like a flashback. Prologues tell of now and whats happening without giving away the actual story away. Although the emotions you portray are real ...

The two things I love: Agatha Christie games and Mysteries. Count me in!

I'm a Lily!